Nostalgia.
It smells like firewood
Like a fly I can’t catch,
I look around frantically for it.
Blackish gray smoke emerging from a brick chimney
It’s too far to see clearly but close enough to smell it.
It looks like December 6th in Orange County:
Flawless, fluffy, cartoon-like clouds fill the skies
The orange sun frowning behind them.
And it smells like blood red posole
It feels like dead brown leaves
Crunching
Underneath my tattered shoes.
Making my toes scrunch up inside them
It sounds tranquil
Like when it’s too cold for the kids to play outside,
and the adults are already home from work so the traffic has died down.
It’s Like a Wednesday evening before “fall back” daylight savings.
***this is a poem I wrote in my creative writing class. My intentions are for imagery to come out the strongest aspect. It was fun to write and I hope you enjoy it. All feedback is welcome***
Wow!! I love it, Frannie!!! You’re rocking, chica!!! 🙂
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I love it Frannie!!!! Xoxo
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